It's really good
The style you used is charming and eye-catching.
It's also very detailed, but without being overwhelming.
I can only see one problem: the nipples. They look like they were cut out. You should make the nipples' right side rounder.
Apart from that, I think the pig would look better if it was staring at the fish, and maybe the pier's poles could use some shading, so they look less flat.
You are right with the nipples problem, I havent note that!
Thanks for the helpful comment!
I can't believe I've never thought of this before.
I really love Modok's expression.
Color this and you'll get my 10.
Here are some pointers.
You have to improve the anatomy, specially his left leg: it looks like it's sticking out of the body, and its upper part is too small. The upper part of Mario's right hand is also too small. His right hand doesn't look good, and his eyes look a bit lifeless. His pose is also kinda akward. Also, try to make your traces smoother, and paint with more regular lines.
On the upper side, his left hand is very nice (hands are hard to draw).
Lastly, I have a question: is he supposed to be jumping?
Thanks for the help on the symmetry and legs, I appreciate the compliment on the hands too. No, Mario just has his foot on a Goomba, somewhat looks like he's marking his territory, doesn't it?
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