Score: 1

"This is wrong."

submission: Exodus Tyson Punched Out

date: May 30, 2009

Normally, I'm all for making fun of anything, but there are some limits.
You shouldn't be making fun of a small girl's tragic death (which wasn't exactly like you have shown in this flash, by the way).
I hate Mike Tyson, who is a violent subnormal rapist, and his ex-wife is a terrible mother, but Exodus wasn't guilty of anything, and her death should be mourned, not parodied.

Score: 6

"Better than I expected"

submission: Why God Why

date: May 30, 2009

Pretty funny short, and pretty well made.
I also enjoyed the interactivity in this flash.

The drawings are nice, and I specially liked God's raging face.
However, when God's on the computer, his right hand looks very odd, almost deformed. Btw, did you make God left-handed on purpose?

The animation is not bad, but you should experiment more with it, and use more FBF. Also, I found the animation of God's head turning into Angryfaic to be severely lacking.

I think you should have shown more explicitly why God hated Newgrounds, perhaps by showing offensive and/or crappily animated movies. Cock jokes are optional.

Good choice of music. I found it very fitting.

Something you should fix:
in the final step of the World Destroyer, the viewer is allowed to click "NEXT" BEFORE destroying the world, missing the explosion.
While I'm on the subject, let me ask you:
why does the computer remark God destroyed a child's hospital or a petting zoo? He destroyed the ENTIRE WORLD, remember?

I also think the last scene is pointless, and doesn't make much sense.

It's much better than your previous flashes, but you should keep getting better.

Score: 5

"Not bad."

submission: Tenacious D - Classico

date: May 3, 2009

First, let me tell you I love Tenacious D. Nice to see I'm not alone.
The drawings are good, and they're fairly well animated.
Too bad it's so short. I think you should have made the whole song, even if you stopped lip-synching-

Lastly, I think it's a shame you sped up the song.
I would have preferred the original song.

Score: 7

"Not bad."

submission: Hot Girl in the ComicShop

date: March 24, 2009

However, you could have used more imagination in the video and show more situations, or emphasize the ones that were already there.
The animation isn't bad, but it was pretty static. More movement would have been nice. The drawings are good, but the "hot girl" looks akward.
I liked the song (in fact, I'm going to check more songs by this band later), but the audio quality is bad, which kinda ruined it.

Score: 6

"Pretty good, but..."

submission: Science!

date: March 18, 2009

The animation has lots of problems. You can often see things like white spaces or non-colored parts. Unless those are intentional. If they are, they don't look nice.
Also, try to show more movement, and make it more fluid.

Score: 7

"The genius did it again."

submission: Food We Eat

date: September 16, 2008

This is probably not my favorite episdoe, but still, I'm glad to see you again,
Jerry Jackson! I didn't thougth I was going to see more of you.

Goodbye and good luck in getting a job for Disney. We know you can do it.

Score: 7

"I enjoyed it"

submission: This Game is a Joke

date: July 15, 2008

Of course, I wasn't expecting a real game, just some little dumb thing to pass some time. And that's just what I got.

You could have added more variety in the stages, though.

Oh, and there's a little problem with the pictures:
some of them are too high, so they can't be fully seen.

Score: 8

"Good to have it here"

submission: Bytesize

date: July 2, 2008

It is good to have it here, since it can disappear of the frontpage.
Also, some people (like me) hadn't watch it all.
Finally, most people don't even pay attention to the bytesize player, and this a chance for them to watch it.

I think that for the portal, you should have modified the bytesize so that it loads everything before it starts. That way, everything could be seen without the loading pauses.

Score: 8

"This deserves better scores"

submission: Landfill Bill

date: June 6, 2008

When you play for long, it turns pretty fun, because the items keep coming and coming, and you have to aim in the correct bin.
You feel like Charles Chaplin in Modern Times

It also really raises the reciclyng awareness. After you play this game, you will remember to recycle (and do it in the right bins).

Score: 7

"Alright... I have mixed feelings about this..."

submission: Bad Baby

date: May 29, 2008

It was very random and disturbing imagery. Wich is totally your style.
Probably meant to be a deep metaphore of something that I can't understand.
Or you just were fucking with us.

Anyway, if you wanted to give the viewer a lasting and strong impression, you surely made it.